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Writers, start your engines
Tom French taught me the strategy of building your work around a key question that the story will answer for the reader. (In the book, this is Tool 31.) He calls that question "the engine" because of its power to pull the reader from the beginning right through to the end.

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Fans of Harry Potter will attest --  as we wait for the seventh and final book from J.K. Rowling -- that we have stored up a list of questions that demand answers from the author. And we won't be satisfied until we reach the final word of the final chapter of the final book (which, by the way, Rowling has revealed is "scar"): Who will live and who will die? Is the headmaster Dumbledore really dead? Is Professor Snape good or evil? Will Ron and Hermione ever hook up? What will happen to Hogwarts, the school for magic?

We feel the power of the story engine as we enjoy -- at times, endure -- many expressions of popular culture: Will the bluesy guy with the gray hair become the next American Idol? Will the Cubs ever win the World Series? Will baseball slugger Barry Bonds become the all-time home run leader, or will revelations about steroid use destroy him? Will Michael Jackson ever ... well, you fill in the blank.

Sonia Nazario of the Los Angeles Times won a Pulitzer prize for "Enrique's Journey: The Story of a Boy's Dangerous Odyssey to Reunite with his Mother." With inspirational physical and moral courage, Nazario retraces the perilous journey of a teenage boy traveling from Honduras through Mexico to the United States to find his mother. The book version could not come at a better time as America struggles to reassert its identity and find its cultural soul in its great debates over immigration, sovereignty and the safety of its borders.

As I began reading Nazario's series (now in book form), I was struck by the transparency of her story engine. Here's the final paragraph of her prologue:
Children who set out on this journey usually don't make it. They end up back in Central America, defeated. Enrique was determined to be with his mother again. Would he make it?
A popular slogan reminds us that it's about the journey, not the destination. With a narrative, that slogan rings false. It's about the journey and the destination, the payoff, the solution to the mystery, the answer to the question.

"Would he make it?"

That engine will drive me for 287 pages to find out.
-- Roy Peter Clark, vice president & senior scholar
Posted by Roy Clark 4:34 PM
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