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*1. For anyone looking for a year-end project, consider this one from the Democrat and Chronicle in Rochester, N.Y. The paper put a face on every person murdered in Rochester for the year. Stunning and simple use of multimedia.

*2. The St. Petersburg (Fla.) Times produced a fascinating story that sheds light on how easy it was to defraud the banking system during the housing boom.

*3. Watch a simple but telling video essay about how immersed children can get while playing video games.

*4. The Rural Blog discusses what failing auto companies mean to rural communities.

5. Salon investigates "Friendly Fire" incident that leads to document shredding.

6. Seven key questions about a car company bailout.

7. The Flip Cam has gone HD with a customizable cover.

8. A fun video to help you with digital conversion.

*9. In a weird way, I dig this photo essay on abandoned Christmas trees.

10. Planet Money is a really good blog about money and finance.

11. You thought sub-prime lenders were gone? No way! They are making FHA loans.

12. You thought sub-prime lenders were gone? No way! They are making FHA loans.

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EDITOR'S NOTE: Al's Morning Meeting is a compendium of ideas, edited story excerpts and other materials from a variety of Web sites, as well as original concepts and analysis. When the information comes directly from another source, it will be attributed and a link will be provided whenever possible. The column is fact-checked, but depends on the accuracy and integrity of the original sources cited. We will correct errors and inaccuracies when we become aware of them.


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Pay attention to this story from The Navy Times about the Pentagon launching a new disability system. This could make a big difference for veterans by cutting the time they wait for disability payments in half. The system could be operational in a month. The story says:

The Defense Department will soon unveil a new, streamlined disability evaluation system that, in tandem with the Department of Veterans Affairs, will replace the current cumbersome process with a single exam and single disability rating.

According to a copy of the plan obtained by Military Times and confirmed by Pentagon officials, veterans medically retired from service will be able to apply for, and get, VA benefits immediately.

Overall, the time spent in the system, from the point a service member is found unfit for duty until he or she begins receiving VA disability payments, will be cut “by about half,” said Bill Carr, undersecretary of defense for military personnel policy.

The plan is the Pentagon’s best effort to make some fixes to the system immediately, without having to seek congressional approval. A broader, longer-range plan unveiled by the White House Oct. 16, based on recent recommendations from a blue-ribbon commission, will require congressional approval and will take longer to implement.

The Pentagon’s interim plan will be phased in with a pilot program to be launched in late November at three military hospitals: Walter Reed Army Medical Center in Washington, D.C.; National Naval Medical Center in Bethesda, Md.; and Malcolm Grove Medical Center at Andrews Air Force Base, Md.

The plan will expand to other facilities as officials evaluate its effectiveness, with the emphasis on facilities that treat greater numbers of troops wounded in the wars. Carr said expansion will take place “as fast as it can.”

The plan, a top priority of Defense Secretary Robert Gates, is the Pentagon’s answer to the Walter Reed scandal earlier this year. Media reports described wounded troops caught in facing a tangle of red tape during their treatment and subsequent medical evaluations.




Murdering a Member of the Military Could be Capital Crime

As federal law stands, if a person killed a member of the military and knew the victim was in the military, he or she could be accused of a capitol crime. Under proposed legislation, it could be a capitol crime whether the killer knew the victim was in the military or not. Similar laws are in place for victims who are in law enforcement.



Banning God From Flag Certificates

Since Congressman Timothy Murphy's Web site sponsored the legislation I mentioned in the above story on capitol crimes for killing a solider, I was browsing his Web site and discovered a story tip. An article on the site says that when people receive a flag that was flown over the U.S. Capitol, the accompanying card can no longer include the word "God" on it. The article explains:

Having a flag flown over the U.S. Capitol to commemorate an important date or event is among the most requested constituent services proved by Congressional representatives. Flags have been ordered to be presented to members of the military, Eagle Scouts, schools, and for many other occasions.

On the certificate accompanying the flag, constituents may have a personal message inscribed to reflect the occasion for which the flag is flown. Statements often include the words, “for love of God, family, and Country,” or “God Bless.” However, the Architect of the Capitol, under the direction of the Speaker of the House, who oversees flag orders, has recently begun to censor the word “God” from these inscriptions because it is a form of “religious expression.”

In one case in Congressman Murphy’s office, a constituent wanted to send a flag to the troops fighting in Iraq. He had been corresponding with them and sending them care packages. As a thank you, the troops sent him an American flag. He wanted to return the gesture by sending them a flag flown over the Capitol with the message, “In appreciation of all you do for us here at home. God bless you all.” His request was denied by the Architect of the Capitol because it contained the word “God.”

The Office of the Architect of the Capitol responded by issuing an update to its policy. The new policy says the card may contain whatever a congressman or senator wants, arguing that cards are a personal form of communication. Read more here [PDF]



Al's Morning Multimedia: Holy Hostel

Jeremy and Noelle
Jeremy Carroll and Noelle Walker
Occasionally I pass along really nice video stories that are worth a look. This is one that any of you who are attempting multimedia can learn from. The piece was done by photojournalist Jeremy Carroll and reporter Noelle Walker, who both work at KNTV NBC 11 in San Jose, Calif. Pay special attention to the great use of natural sound in this piece and to Jeremy's amazing use of natural light. His creative camera angles take your eyes where they normally do not go. I asked Noelle some questions about the project, which takes viewers inside a San Francisco church that has become home to homeless people who sleep in its pews. The project just won a national Edward R. Murrow award.

Q. How did you find this story?

A. This was the initiative of the photographer, Jeremy. He saw it in The San Francisco Chronicle, and approached me with the idea. The article was compelling, but we thought it was a story that was made for audio and video.

Q. I have heard that you did much of this piece on your own time. Tell me about that.

Holy hostel
A. Simply put, we were a bit obsessed! It was a story we knew had great potential. A story that we thought viewers would be compelled to watch. We did not want it to get stuck in the fast track and miss the mark.

Q. How do you collaborate on adding words to the pictures? What were your discussions like during the scripting process?

A. We talked about some of the iconic imagery we wanted to juxtapose against the gritty tenderloin.  Jeremy gave me some incredible pictures to work with that seemed to beg for a little breathing room. There were times I would run line options by Jeremy. For the most part, I write with a "soundtrack" in my head. Sounds a bit nutty, but I hear the pacing of the reporter track, nat sound and sound bites in my head before I put them in the script. The advantage of working with someone who is on the same page and approaches a story similarly is that I don't have to do a lot of interpreting!

Q. It seems to me that journalists sometimes are squeamish about stories that concern religion. What worries did you have about getting too "churchy?"

A. I didn't think of this as a "church" story, or even a religious story. The church was a location for the piece. It is a story about humanity, and struggle and compassion.

Q. Your story does not include anybody who is saying something like, "We should get those bums out of here, this is a church." Is the support for allowing them to sleep on the pews all day as universal as I would think from watching the piece?

A. That would have been a very different piece. If parishoners don't like the homeless hanging out in their pews, they're probably not going to church there. It was such an accepted thing. I watched a woman one day going through the stations of the cross, weaving her way through snoring men and women!

Holy hostel
Q. The sounds in this piece really make it special, especially the sound of snoring. Give us a lesson in how important sound is to a video story. What makes for great sound?

A. The sound makes the story. The less of me, the better! We've been asked if the snoring was real, which it was, of course!  But not all snoring sounds the same. I took the wireless mic and walked through the pews listening for different, interesting snores. Same with the steam coming out of the manhole. I played "chicken" with oncoming traffic after midnight one night to get the wireless close to the source, while Jeremy watched my back and the traffic from the sidewalk!

Q. This piece includes music that you added during the editing process. Lots of journalists oppose adding music to video pieces. How did you think through that issue?

A. The music helped set a tone and, maybe more importantly, helped weave the piece through the passing time. I don't think music sound should be a "bed" for a piece, but I do think that when used in the right circumstances, it can add to a piece.


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Editor's Note: Al's Morning Meeting is a compendium of ideas, edited story excerpts and other materials from a variety of Web sites, as well as original concepts and analysis. When the information comes directly from another source, it will be attributed and a link will be provided whenever possible. The column is fact-checked, but depends on the accuracy and integrity of the original sources cited. Errors and inaccuracies found will be corrected.




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